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milestone one feedback:
You did a good job on this assignment, however, you should stay focused on your topic. You mentioned cyberbullying in the first paragraph, however, throughout your paper you refer to social media. If your topic is Cyberbullying in Social Media then you should state this as your topic statement in the first paragraph.
milestone two feedback:
Your topic should remain the same in all of the milestones. Here is my feedback on your 2-2 Assignment:
You mentioned cyberbullying in the first paragraph, however, throughout your paper you refer to social media. If your topic is Cyberbullying in Social Media then you should state this as your topic statement in the first paragraph.”
You did an excellent job on this assignment. Please review the detailed feedback and make the necessary changes.
You are describing cybersecurity threats in this paper. If this is the topic that you chose, then it should be consistent in the upcoming milestones.
milestone three feedback:
PLEASE STAY ON TOPIC AND CONSISTENT!!
